There's only one 'g' in Pollnagollum . . .
This is true, but does not invalidate the clue. I am still fairly innocent of the protocol for cryptic clues, but overlaps such as the use of g in nag and the same letter again for the start of Gollum are surely acceptable so long as it is just an overlap not moving the letter around.
In setting the clue I had in mind snebbit's clue on Monday:-
"
Riches follow a whittled HB, if only the truth had been told first instead..."
The answer Daren Cilau used the letter e in a similar way:
Dar
en Cilau
Daren Cilau
The overlap caused me a bit more work, but made the process more interesting.
As I don't know what I am doing, I am open to further argument. Is there an agreed way to set these clues?
The current clue looks very tricky. With no confidence I'll have a go at:
"Hole in the floor"
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